First cut feedback

From our first cut of our product, we got a range of feedback. This feedback was mainly positive and useful for us to develop our product and make it as best as we possibly can. One comment that we got stated that our shot transition had "perfect timing". As well as that, another person told us that our product was very "fluent". Both of these comments together showed us that our filming was as good as we had hoped for our first cut and it was very important forus to continue to focus on having excellent, smooth shot transitions.
A criticism that our product received was that our choice of font for our credits "didn't seem to fit the conventions of the thriller genre". As a result of this, we decided to change the font and altered the size as well as positioning. We hope this will convey the thriller genre better. We were aware that our product lacked in length but we knew that this was because of the little time we had. It was brought to our attention that we needed to add more filming to our piece before we continue to edit, so that our film increased in time.